Wednesday, November 14, 2007

Shouting "Whoah!"
as my turd falls -
hope nobody else is in here.

2 comments:

Thi N said...

A few days, somebody told me that my haiku were glib and really not that good.

This stopped haiku production for a few days, which altered my experience of the world considerably. No haiku occurred to me.

The first break from the absence of haiku happened spontaneously with this shitting.

I realized, later, that the haiku wasn't just a return to form, but a also a reply to the original criticism.

Thank you, subconscious.

Carla said...

This makes me smile.